Diaries of Sin - Comments

I honestly didn't really enjoy this reading too much. It was really good writing wise, but I think that the characters were kind of cliche with the whole 'I'm a man thing' and I'm a 'sex vixen' thing. Plus, the whole story seemed very sexual, more erotica than a story. I think that if there was a bit more depth to the characters and plot, you'd have a good thing going.

The story is awsome,cant wait for your updates xD

I get so frustrated with Jessie. Honestly. I have almost quit this story so many times, and I only just started it today. XD She makes me want to flip tables and scream. But I ADORE Seth, so I keep reading. :) Update soon!

This storyy is justt perfect♥ Keep up the good work.

Love :) Seth got a little scary in this one but I feel bad for him.

Hmm wonder what she will do...

Grr need more now!!!!
Must know what happens!!!!!!!!

This story is AMAZING!!!!! It's creative, descriptive, sweet, romantic, cute. Everything about it is great! Even the authors notes! Oh, btw, i took your alive, and now sleep with a pad of paper and a pen under my pillow.
Lol, dw, i talk to myself in public, too :P
update soon!!! <3

Yay! You updated!
Really good, I loved it!
Imagine if the lock broke or something and Seth's mum came in? :O
Dea x

Hi, I'm back! ^^ I'd comment sooner, but I've been a little short of time lately, so....
Anytime James or Stella shows up I keep praying nothing will happen hehe, I'm getting totally paranoid about Jesse and Seth ^^. Loved this little moment they had alone -and again, great "hot" scene, I swear I'm learning from you haha!. And it's so great how after a bad moment, Seth will go and assure Jesse is everything alright and how he STILL loves her after everything. And I'll tell you, I have a weak point for possessive men, and I had to supress saying an "Awww" out loud when Seth told Jessie "you're mine!". Holy cuteness! (=

Good job, keep it up!

uh...and why do I get this feeling something dreadful is up to that concert? *crossing fingers*

Hi! I have never commented on your story before, but I have subscribed! I love your story, it is awesome, Update!
(P.S: I hate Stella :( )

so awsome
more please

Poor Seth, things just don't seem to be going his way. Good update :) Can't wait to see what happens next.

Ow, beautiful!
First off, I must say Pixie's great! Now that she appeared a little more in the story I can say I love her! She's so funny and adorable, such a nice best friend to have around!
Other thing I liked so much in your story -and forgot to include on my comment above- is these little misunderstandings/misinterpretations between Jessie and Seth. Like when Jessie does "A" and Seth thinks "B". Or "Z". And vice-versa. It totally sounds like real life ^^.
Aaand they spending time together was great as well, especially when Seth offered to wash her hair ^^ Hope they'll work out a way so they can stay together and really be a couple without worrying all the time abou being caught. And hope this Stella bitch won't make too much damage.
Good job! Update soon! (=

the best update in a long time...:) love it

Love the story! But i can already tell im not going to like stella-.-

Oh, hi! I've been reading your story for a while without subscribing, but I'll be subscribing now.
I'll confess I'm a bit envious of your sex scenes...more especifically, how you write them! They're so great and vivid that leave me drooling all over my keyboard hehe. Ok, stopped.
I'd love to see Seth and Jessie spending more time together, you know, exploring their relationship, maybe living a day of peace before all hell break loose again (=
And well, I also know by experience that when you uptdate many times in a row you tend to lose subscribers, I guess people don't exactly enjoy receiving those e-mails. So, don't worry, there's nothing wrong with your story, they'll most probably come over and keep reading, and subscribing again later. That's how life goes on Mibba (=
Keep up the good work!

really linking it
please update

I have a feeling that Seth is going to get a little drunk pretty soon, haha..I like this friend of Jessie, she seems pretty interesting, looking forward for more <3.

Now that was hot! Damn Seth's mother for daring to interrupt such a powerful moment, poor Seth haha.. I'm wondering how are they gonna act on each other after that <3.. Your writing is very good and I like it a lot that you didn't just jumped on the action or something like that and you took your time to create an atmosphere, updateee?:D