Life Through Joey's Eyes - Comments

i know i havent commented much on this story but i have to say.
BRAVO!!!
lol
It was very good and you have lots of talent.
:)

Loved the story! Awesome plot and ending.

Looking forward to the sequel!

Sapphire Jade! That's adorable! I love the name! Awws. I love this story! U are an amazing writer! This has been a very interesting and unique story. Very realistic! Bravo!

Can't wait for the sequel!!!

Why October?

You wanted an overall comment, here you go.

It was qute a realistic plot. I mean, people do run away from their parents to be together, get pregnant and go back, all whilst still being young. It's romantic.

The whole way that you made the characters be around each other, and the way that they communicated was qute in depth, and made it seem like you were there while they talked, which is a good skill to use.

Not only that, but the whole way that Joey and Ramona went through trivial things, like having a baby at such a young age, and the argumant was a really good part of the story. Because I can imagine that suddenly gaining such a responsibilty at such a young age isn't a very good thing, and you developed that well.

The way that you made sure that the reader's could relate to the struggles of the couple were fantastic, and throughtout the story where we watched each character develop, it was awesome.

Overall, I would say that this has been a very entralling story, and I personally cannot wait for the sequal. And by the way, Jade is most totally my name XD
I love the baby's name!!

Wowow!!!! I can't wait for the baby to come!!! It reminds me of how I had to help my cousin with her childbirth... she did the same, natural child birth. I want deliver my children naturally too!

I can't wait for the baby to come (Mona's, I'm not preggers!)

AHHHH!!
Baby time!!!
Boom!!!

Naww!!
I'm so happy they made up!!

I'm glad I caught up!
God, I've missed this story =]
But yeah, poor Joey! God Ramona, what a bloody stress head!

Hey! It's good!!! Poor Joey!!!

I think you made a double post....

Aww!!! It's good! I love this!!! More please...

Plagued:

They should want to know!

I know! Seriously, who doesn't want to know the sex of their first grandkid?! I mean, shopping, hello!!!

But, it'd be tough on Adie, since she just had three more kids and is going to be a grandma already....

They should want to know!

Hey! I love the new chapter!!! Good Job!!

Why wouldn't everyone wanna know that Ramona's having a girl? It's good flipping news!!!

Aww!!! That's a cute chapter!!! Good Job!!! Please Continue! I love getting the email that your story is updated so often!!! It really is a joy to read!!!!

you better bloody continue it!
you been told!

You should really continue I know I should comment but I'm to lazy. But I can make an effort to do so if you pplease continue this.

I will definately subscribe to the sequel!!!! No problem!!!

Aww!!! Poor well, Everyone!!! That's so terrible of what Austin did, though.......

Good Job!!! More please?

TRE! AHHHHHH!!!
*dribbles*
Tre...crying? Aww!!!
*pulls out Kleenex*

OMG!!! I was freaking out when Joey answered the door and Billie and Tre were crying!!! Nice job twisting it up!!!