I don't think I've ever come across a hit-man story before so hmm, this looks very interesting :D I'll recommend you using white writing or something, the black makes it hard to see against the dark grey :S But oh my goodness, I love the way how Brian kills people. He seems a lot more intelligent than your usual hit-man thug and the way how he seems really bored when he's killing people just highlights how dry and sarcastic he is. x] This is really good so far, great job :3
November 26th, 2011 at 04:16am