Playing With Puppets - Comments

You realllly should update!

dude this is so goood!
i really want to read more!!
why has it stopped!
please!!! pretty pretty pleaseeeeeee update soon! xx

Awhh ;O
Why is brian like that?
I love him and Zacky n.n
Poor Zee ;o

Haha, yes, i am still alive.
Heavily bogged down with schoolwork and a dumbass best friend who can't take care of himself, but alive. Writing can't take such a high priority in my life right now and I'm sorry for it.

-Kyla.
xoxo

yoo hoo!! are you alive????

I love this
Please post more

I love how the poems are in the story. Very well written, and I can't wait to read more.

Awww they're all worrying about him. Zee let them help you!!! More when you can xxx

MATT TAKE HIM AWAY BEFORE HE KILLS HIM!!! Why does Syn do this to him?? I wanna know why! Once again well written, more when you can xxx

oh my words. please please update this story. it's amazingly wonderful. (:

Aw this is really sweet. I hope he does sort himself out. Really well written xxx

POOR ZACKY!

That was... whoa. It's so heartbreaking how much Zacky loves Syn, regardless of how badly he treats him.
That last paragraph was probably my favorite part. It almost made me cry...
xx

Oh, by the way.... That picture of Brian that you have is devilishly beautiful =]

Aw man.. This story is.... indescriabable. I really hate it when Brian is portrayed as the bad guy, but I can't help but to love this story. I feel what Zacky is going through, and, to put it bluntly, it sucks...

If you knew I faked it, you’d hit me… heck, if you knew I fake you’d probably cut my dick off with a butchers knife
This made me laugh in a sick twisted way...

but I didn’t think it was a good idea to show you how to use a knife properly,
This was kinda funny.....

I kiss you, your cheeks are wet
Oh Brian, what happened? *hugs tightly* He's probably feeling guilty about what he's doing to Zacky, but he can't really treat him any other way. It's probably just his nature... or maybe he's bi-polar... 0.o

You’re shouting at me and I don’t know what I did wrong this time.
Oh boy.... not again. *clasps hands* Please don't do anything to ZeeBear, please!

I really feel bad ffor Zacky, I mean I don't know what I'd do if I was with someone like that...

I really like how you have this written, the title and 'saying' for the background fit perfectly. And I think it's hard doing that.

My only, real improtant, comment is that Brian needs help

Wow. Syn sure has some screwed up emotions... poor Zacky.
<33

*raises hand*
New Reader.
Anyways, I totally love this.
It would seem that Syn has something bothering him and takes it out on Zacky by abusing him. Or maybe he grew up in an abusive home and that's all he knows.
*sighs*
I hope it works out for them.
:D
More soon?

Why does Syn do this to him? REALLY I WANT TO KNOW!!!! More when you can, this story is so intreiging! xx

You continue to write wonderful, wonderful stories. Ones that I love, yet make me completely jealous that I can't write like this.