Pittsburgh's Royal Couple - Comments

This was one of the first stories I read on Mibba about a year ago. I am in awe of the bravery of the authors to make their work public. At the time I didn't even have the courage to make comments for fear of not finding the right words. Now, as I have just finished reading this story a second time, I want to make sure you know how wonderful your writing truly is. Even knowing the ending, I loved just as much as the first time. Amazing!!!

only thing i would change is the font color because its hard to read. Also, im really surprised you didnt have sidney make more out the men that raped his wife and kidnapped his child, that could have been a much large twist in the story.

This story is great! I just finished reading it and I loved it,

I just read this story. It was a great read. is it over?

I just found this story and read it in 2 days! I absolutely loved it! You should consider doing a sequel of somesort, even if its just a few chapters. I would definately read it!!! :)

that was REALLY amazing...and im sooo sad its over...u should do a sequel or something...on the kids or whatever...this was a great story and im glad i actually gave it a chance to read it!!!! FANTASTIC JOB!!!!

WOW...after a couple days of reading this i laughed, almost cried, and was on the edge of my seat the entire time, trying to finish this, my hartred for Crosby put to the side so i could finish this, which putting all the hate away takes a lot so you should be pleased with how good u wrote this story for me to actually finish it...UPDATE SOON!!!!

love this story and can't wait for more. I hope that you end it with an epilogue of them like years in the future.

I love the update. You should do a Kris Letang story next.

jw but is there going to be ANY action in this story. i'm on chapter 12 and everytime they are about to have sex it skips to the next scene.

on all of your stories, you mess up the main characters name and put "Sarah" instead of annabelle!

Thank you for finally finding Patrick, it was a great, sweet chapter. Keep up the good work

Glad they found him but are we going to find out who took him. was it just random or was there a reason they took patrick CROSBY? Was that crazy chick behind it or something?

What happens!!??????? I need to know!!! Update really soon!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Love this story!
Just have Patrick come home and him be okay. Sidney and Annabelle have already gone through enough.
Please bring him home! can't wait till the next update

Poor Belle - I cant believe all that she has gone through in her short life...losing her parents, miscarrying now she has been beaten, raped and her baby has been kiddnapped! This is almost too much for any one person to bear.

I hope they find Patrick soon,

Could you have them find Patrick and have him be okay already? I hate that he's missing. Otherwise Loving your writing!

Cliff hanger much!? Post again soon. Loving it. Poor Patrick :(

oh my god. more right now please. have to know what the police are there for. did they find him? who did this? was it a crazy fan girl?

Oh My Gosh .! I Cant Wait To See What Happens .