Trials in Life - Comments

@ Nia_Flores
That's ok. I promise that the story will progress and the reason that we wrote it like that was to give readers a feel of the characters themselves before things start to happen. With the points of view, we try to give the readers a 360 POV of what is happening in the scene. I'm hoping when I get my laptop that we can begin posting again but this summer has been busy with work, parenting, and etc. So if you just hang in there, I promise the story will be rolling again soon.!!!!

i just started reading this story & I have to say that I like it. I agree with the last comment, it's a bit confusing sometimes, I guess because there's so many characters in it, but I think I have a vague idea of what the whole thing is about. I really like the long chapters, they keep me entertained. The only thing I've noticed, not that it's a bad thing, it's that they tend to get stuck in the same thing & the plot develops a bit slower for my taste, but that's just me. In no way I'm saying the story sucks. I really like it, & I hope you update & keep writing!!!!

Ps: I tend to post random smilies!!!

So I'm Reading The Story But Like I Dont Really Get It Can You Like Explain It In A Short Summary Or Something Please?

we have not gave up on the stories, merely busy but we are writing still and will get back to posting so please keep subscribed so that when we do post again you will get the update and thanks for the comment, SEH

I miss this story o:

So I finally got around to reading the updates!
Sorry I suck I know.
I finally updated my own story after over a month lol
Life is way too stressful right now.
ANYWAY!
So from what I'm getting is that they ALL are jealous of each other over Rhaine?
And she kinda likes all of them in different ways.
GEEZ I wish I had her problems!
Jaci is a bitch...just sayin :)
Can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well, Zacky sounds so sweet like a good buddy,if i was rhaine i"d think twice bout going out again with all the bickering.jaci needs to grow up some.

i kinda would like to see rhaine and Gage together secretly cause they er not really blood kin .but don't think that will actually happen .it has to be Brian or Matt because they are the main focus.

Ok SO!
I'm thinking that Jaci slept with Brian...it has to be him!
I'm kind hoping it is because then that spells D-R-A-M-A!
or...Omg! What if its Matt?!
AHHHH! I seriously just read the last 3 chapters in like 15 minutes bc I was so into it lmao
I'm a loser, I know.
Anywhore, I'm lovin' this story and the way its written.
IF I had to choose between the stories, this one would take first place.
But that's right now...have to see where they both go from here. ;)
I do know that I...WANT...MORE...MATT!!!! Lol
That's not a surprise though is it?
XoXo

Jaci, seems like she's just selfish.Rhaine is more mature,innocent,smart girl.I like Rhaine.

First thing that comes to my mind:
I want more. I really do! & I liked this update! :)

But, omg, when reading the who.. "I slept with someone but won't tell you who or why.." thing my mind immediately went: "BRIAN". and then I was all like. "Please no. Please. Noo."
So, please no? D:

MEEE GUSTAAAAAAAAAA. I mean that there as an update, I will come to the details now..

Like first of all, omg, like no ._. I don't know what happened, but I was so for Rhaine and Brian and now all of a sudden Matt sneaked into my head and with this situation..I mean, shituation I don't know who to ship! But I hope R will not be mad at Brian, or at least talk to him soon, it would be so bad otherwise. :c and Matt...idk, Brian was there first, and Matt seems a little harsh. I guess right now I'm all up for a threesome. But....okay, seriously..I loved the update and I can't wait for more. Oh the drama... xDD

I WANT AN UPDATE.

*le pout* pretty pleeeease?

Omg, I was so shocked that I hadn't found this story before!
I love it so much, i really can't describe it!
It's really awesome, especially the way it's written, it's all so realistic and easy to read and just...ahh, I love it, I do, do do! I'm probably a bit overreacting but this is just brilliant! :)

Can't wait for the next update! o:

well,i think Matt,dose care for her but has the sense to know he needs to back out her life .and she"s caught up in something herself.I think they both will soon find out that they"er just meant for each other.

I really hope you update soon. I love this story.

I"m sure Matt didn"t appreciate the comment after he"s the one here actually helping her.But at least she"s being honest.But too she is sleep deprived at this stage.

Where are all the others?!
Jerks!!
Omg, I love Matt.
I wish he would take care of my head wounds.
And...other things. ;)
SORRY! Can't help the perviness.
UPDATE LIKE RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And update Rockstar Lost...
K, bye!

she is gonna be Soo pissd when that cold water hits her!

yikes!
poor Matt being stuck with her, lol