This Temptation - Comments

  • sportychick40

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    Please don't let it be over!! A few more chapters would be nice
    November 24th, 2011 at 01:58am
  • hockey bliss

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    This is going to go horribly awry because of a damn Boston Bruin. See why I hate them so! Seriously I hope Tyler's big mouth only causes Tori & Jeff to admit they want to be more than bed buddies. Jeff has so much more I want to read about him learning! LOL
    November 21st, 2011 at 06:52am
  • no.one.is.home

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    Jeff should ask her to fake it around Seguin and then you know stop fakin it ;)
    November 20th, 2011 at 09:34am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Great update honey
    November 20th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • pineapple55

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    oh i hope tori doesn't screw this up! because i honestly can't see jeff doing anything to cause tension...i can't wait to read more! :)
    November 20th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    lol i wonder if Jeff will get Jealous of Tyler when he meets Tori!
    Love love loved the update!
    November 20th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • the epic blonde

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    Title is extremely ironic. This story is temptation.
    November 20th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • renodvrhs

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    This story is amazing!!! Still totally not sure about how I feel about this type of Skinner, but i think the feelings good :D
    November 18th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    I love that they're so into each other!!
    UNF UNF UNF! this chapter! ;)
    November 16th, 2011 at 08:55am
  • RosiePosie08

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    This is so awesome.!
    November 16th, 2011 at 08:52am
  • no.one.is.home

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    Jeff is to adorable! Even in one of your sexy stories!
    November 16th, 2011 at 08:42am
  • Emiliana

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    This story has been surprisingly easy for me to read, considering I always view Jeff innocently. Somehow, the storyline seems plausible & realistic, which is why I think I can handle it. Also, thank you for introducing me to the work pyrotechnics. Learn something new everyday, haha!
    November 16th, 2011 at 05:40am
  • MalloryjayT

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    I LOVE THE NEW CHAPTER and I was so excited to see it was updated! Fantastic job!
    November 16th, 2011 at 04:58am
  • pineapple55

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    AHHH SO HOT. and he's just so damn sweet. you're giving him the perfect balance of sexy and sweet. honestly, i've never found skinner attractive until now.

    also, i loved this part: "Just when I thought he was being sexy, he smiled all cute. When he was being cute, his forearm flexed around a knife hard enough to knock me over." No wonder I loved it, it showcases his two sides perfectly :)
    November 16th, 2011 at 04:46am
  • evgeni

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    85hlsiuhg5e89wohlsrle OMG, this chapter! Loved it!!!!
    Match-maker Eric is just perfect! Everything he says and does keeps getting better and better. (Look at me, gushing over him so much and he isn't even the focus of this story).
    I still love Jeff and Tori just as much as I love Eric though. I absolutely love their relationship right now and can't wait to see how it continues to progress.
    November 15th, 2011 at 05:06am
  • Emiliana

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    Friends with very lucrative benefits, indeed. Something tells me one (or most likely both) of them is going want to be more than just friends in the near future.
    November 14th, 2011 at 07:57am
  • hockey bliss

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    I watched the Pens-Canes game this weekend and there was a Skinner interview between periods and I could do nothing but think dirty thoughs. And I blame you completely. LOL
    This chapter - and I'm sure the chapters that follow. - will do nothing go change that.
    God, I hope this story is LONG there are so many other things I want to imagine Jeff doing the next time he's interviewed!
    November 14th, 2011 at 07:56am
  • RosiePosie08

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    I love this.
    November 14th, 2011 at 05:39am
  • no.one.is.home

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    They are so perfect for each other, I seriously can't wait to see what else Mr. Matchmaker Staal will do to make them more than friends.
    November 14th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • pineapple55

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    AHHHH ERIC!!! hahahah so great. and i'm so glad she had her fun this time too ;)
    November 14th, 2011 at 03:43am