This Temptation - Comments

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Jeff Skinner unf!
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I am still - literally - laughing out loud at Shana's whole Jordan-Eric-helicopter-HotTubTuesdays bit. AWESOME.
This story is ridiculously addictive! Also I adore the way you write Eric Staal - would just die of happiness if you could write a story about him!

Eric so would try to solve Jeff's problem like that!

Ugh, I love this story so much I can't stand it. And Eric is perfect by the way; everything he says and does in this story is pure gold. Maybe an Eric Staal story in the future? ;)

But, as for this story, you already know that I'll be anxiously waiting for the next update. :D

omg Eric never fails to make me laugh...can't wait to read more! i'm so excited for jeff to finally bring tori over the edge! :)

I love this story

Loved this update!! They're both so cute and OMG, Eric would be like the "doting father" when Jeff shows up in the locker room.
I CAN'T wait for your next update...like seriously, they make my day haha :)

Ahhh Jeff is becoming a sex addict! Hahaha
Lol loved the update

Our little Skinny's growing up :' )

Baby Skinner's cherry is popped! I don't know how to feel, haha. It was amazing, as always.

Love this update. Thata boy skinner!

There are no words. You are a writing God. This story is indescribably perfect.

You're making me have nasty, dirty thoughts about Jeff in bed....and I kinda like it. :) Great update, can't wait for your next one (hopefully some chirping from Eric to Jeff about the sex---because you know, a Staal would know hahah)

I can't believe I got a first hand look into Skinner's first time. Hahaha. Love this story. Can't wait for more. :)

Ahhhhhh I thought the last chapter was UNF but this one!
UNF UNF UNF

Hahaha "the underwear cheerleader." But f7g4owsguiskg4la, omg I seriously don't know how you do it. She didn't even get off on their first encounter but that didn't even make the chapter any less hot. It anything, it made it hotter know that she's gonna get her's soon and Jeff might just go absolutely crazy when it happens.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

ahhhhh can't wait til she gets hers!

That chapter was way hotter than 90% of the actual sex scenes I have read. Just when I think I can't possibly love any of your stories more, you right this & it tops EVERYTHING.

Jeff knows what he wants alright :P

I don't know how you managed to make a scene where they're not actually having sex so hot, but you did. Bravo!