this sets it all up perfectly. i love that frank is max and the fact that pete is danni is too funny lol. i didn't realize at first because i haven't seen the movie in a while, but once i got here i was like ohhhhhh i see how she's doing this!
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- “Boo!” at the top of his lungs. He pounced on Frank, wrapping his arms around the... taller boy? When has Frank Iero ever been taller than him?
LOVE that it's bob and matt hahahaha. pete was right in thinking that he somehow involved all four mcr dummers hahaha. and bob giggling? doesn't make sense either. and i almost died when i read that he calls frank "jersey" fucking love it! it's awesome how you're making changes to fit your story but that you're still keeping with the movie!!
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- Pete turned to notice Bob Bryar and Matt Pelisser. He wasn’t sure why they were there... although he had said ‘drummer dude’, did that mean every drummer MCR ever had? This could get complicated.
“Hey, fuckers! You stole my shoes!” Frank yelled, storming up to them.
“Yeah Jersey, they fit really well, look.” Matt pointed down at his feet.
Bob giggled next to him, “Jersey.”
i really wanted pete to say to brendon (allison) that frank really liked her "yabows" lol. that would've made my night lol. and for some reason, probably the hour i was reading this at and the small font on my phone, i didn't catch right away that this was ray and the way brothers together, but i love the name. though, wouldn't they be warlocks or at least wizards? but it's funny that you kept them witches ahahahaa.
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- “I’m really into witches. I like your costume. Do you know about the witch museum we have here? It’s a house filled with all the possessions of the Toroway Brothers.”
these notes crack me up, but this one especially! it's funny how they don't realize that they're in the movie except for patrick. and the fact that pete's never watched the movie makes me think he missed out on a HUGE part of his childhood lol
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- The ‘Bedtime book of Spells: Volume II, given to Ray Toroway by the devil himself, also known as Mr David Grohl of the 15th century clan, known as the Foos, predominantly known for their tenacity in their quest for Nirvana. Their use of witchcraft led them to God smiting Grohl and his disciples into damnation for all eternity. This book is laden with the most evil of spells, no idiot should attempt to read from this book, including Mr Peter Lewis Kingston Wentz III of Chicago, Illinois. If this doesn’t get your attention, I don’t know what will.
Hint: keep the book with you at all times!
C
first thought in my mind: FUCKING YESSSSSSS lol sarah was my favorite witch because of how dumb she was lol. and then when i read that you made her gerard i couldn't stop laughing. seriously, i had tears coming out of my eyes dude! it was insane, and it's perfect for later when he's like "oh a boy, let me play with him". i will quote that later lol
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- Gerard Way bounced on the souls of his feet, smiling giddily as he surveyed his old home. He reached up behind a support pillar above the door. “My lucky rat tail!” He exclaimed, putting it to his face and inhaling happily. “Right where I left it. Hasn’t even aged a day, just like me."
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 (does this get my point across hahaa)
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- “Hey!” Frank jumped out from his hiding spot, trying not to look as terrified as he felt, mostly to impress the quivering mess that was Brendon at that moment in time. “Leave my little sister alone."
“A boy!” Gerard giggled. “Let me play, let me play with him.”
Ray only laughed as he zapped Frank with a bolt of energy, pinning him to the wall behind him. Gerard scurried over and began rubbing his head against Frank’s neck, his hand playing at Frank’s waist, cooing at the “yummy little boy”.
i love you, gerard!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Ray rolled his eyes, shoving both of them onto the tarmac, making them both scream, Gerard collapsed onto the asphalt dramatically, attempting to swim.
again, just perfect that you gave each person the character that they have. gerard's is key, seriously! and i remember mikey's "name" now, it's mary!! :)
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- “James Dewees was Ray’s lover,” Patrick began, remembering that part of the movie plot, “but he did something wrong, with Gerard I think, which is just weird considering what he’s like with Frank really.” Frank raised an eyebrow at Patrick causing him to stutter. “Yeah, any way, Ray killed him and sewed his mouth shut with a dull needle. So he couldn’t suck Gerard off behind his back any more."
where did you come up with this??!?! i fucking love it!
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- “Unfaithful lover, though you’re dead, I always loved how you gave head. Wiggle your toes, spread your legs, lift your head, use hands to beg. Life is sleepy, wake up boy. Help me live then become my toy.”
perhaps you should rewrite this so frank can entertain gerard yessssss ;) lol
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- The journey continued with Gerard rubbing at Jon’s crotch hungrily while he tried to drive. Ahead, a cat ran out in front of the car, getting flattened as Jon reached a very early, embarrassing climax, still housed in his pants. Gerard pouted, he’d hoped to have been entertained for the entire ride, at least.
major props to frank for screaming that!
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- “Tonight, I bring terrible news, I am a virgin!”
