Our Love - Comments

Ok, so i can't even begin to explain how much I am looking forward to this story! You must update soon! I loved the prologue because it was ver relatable. I'm really excited to see where this story will go! As others have mentioned there were a couple of grammatical mistakes, but I am looking forward to this. You have another subscriber! :)

First of all, the layout to this story is incredibly beautiful.
As for the story, I'm very interested to see where you take it.
The main character seems to be in a lot of pain,
So I really want to read further and she whether or not she gets over this guy.
Keep writing!
You did a really great job setting the mood for the story.
Can't wait for your next update!
:)

It's a little depressing, but that's what you were aiming for, I'm sure. I do think that you over used your commas a lot and that there are places where you could start a totally new sentence, but you kept going. I think that a little time re-reading this and going through VERY CAREFULLY and picking these sentences out and then fixing them would make this prologue easier to read and make it look a lot better. As for the plot itself, I'm interested to see where it's going. Keep up the good work.

It's cute c:
And has a pretty layout.

It's short, but so cute. <3
I'm subscribing, and you must update soon!

I like this so far. :) the first chapters a good way to start this story.
You do have some grammar,punctuation, & spelling problems;
But besides that, its a good one. : ) keep up the good work !
&&' the layout..adorable.

I love the starting of this.
It's brilliant.
I honestly can't wait for another chapter!