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I love this story. I only noticed a few grammar mistakes. But they were minor. In chapter one, when she said: Its Saturday, it's supossed to be, It's Saturday

August 23rd, 2012 at 01:54pm
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Nice story can't wait to read more!

December 11th, 2011 at 11:56pm

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