Found this story and it's pretty good (and the banner is awesome :)) I like your plot and the characters you've created. But somehow I don't like the twins, I mean if they knew Matt was after their friend why did they drag her to the party and let her out of sight? But I like Brian and Matt's temper is somehow cute. Can't wait for more :)
I love the idea of having two sides of Matt. The human side being Matt where he is kind and his wolf side Shadows where he is more dominate and aggressive. The more she fights him, the more it'll rile Shadows up and he will lost control and do what primal instinct tells him to do. I can't wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!