Mr Winter, Did You Miss Her? - Comments

hooow can he possibly do that to her :'(
he should be the one apologizing!
great chapter! more soon please (:

Just read this all not too long ago and I swore that I commented on this before but dear god, this is amazing.

First, Josh is a dick. Sure she kept it from him but that should be more of a reason to prove her wrong. To man the fuck up and take care of her!

I love this ladies and I think you should update and update very soon! (;

i have this bookmarked because it's that good heh

;~; bbys noooo don't take a break. I just caught up on the last three chapters and I'm all sad chipmunk because I want them to work it out, but I feel like they're both too stubborn to realize that, in a few ways, they're both wrong. But it happens. I just hope that they'll be able to work through things and possibly see a happy ending.

aw man I was so hoping he wouldn't want to "take a break" or anything ajdfjksdf this is really good though, i'm super excited to see what happens next

I hope their 'break' doesn't last long. Shes gonna need someone there with her with her when she's going through all the pregnancy stuff.

This is so good, and I haven't commented yet because mibba has been hating me. BUT. I love this. I love Hollie, but I want to smack her too. I felt like her bff (whose name I am forgetting at the moment) with how frustrated she was with Hollie, but I couldn't believe she told Josh for Hollie. NOT OKAY GIRL. NOT OKAY. And then i want to just kill Joshua. Poor Hollie ;~;
I love this though, and I love you both, and yep. Super fab! :3 <3

What so he's just gonna leave her to be alone while she's in a delicate condition?! Jesus josh.

Josh better talk things out with Hollie. I was honestly surprised when Lily told him, a good kind of surprised though. :)

Soo good :)

Have I told you guys that this is awesome? Well, it is :) love u both! and i totally didnt expect lily to tell josh! it was a good twist, or surprise on my half. XD cant wait for more

Josh is so stupid. I can understand that Hollie didn't tell him... hopefully they'll work things out!
I reallyyy enjoy your story! You guys are amazing xD Next chapter soon please (:

gosh, seriously, this is just perfection. and Josh's pov is so nice to read. can't wait for the next hollie chapter <3

ahh omg this is really good, i can't wait for the next chapter

perfect, perfect, perfect. all is perfect. keep writing josh's pov because one-sided stories don't hold my attention as much, and i'm kind of already adjusted to the transition between the two. keep at it. this story's brilliant.

She just needs to tell him already! I don't think he'd be very happy if Lily had to tell him. Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

oh, hollie. moodiness comes with pregnancy, so i guess its only fair for her to think its her against the world. BUT THEN AGAIN, she still does need to tell josh. that little threat at the end was great. i could totally see a show down of both of them trying to get to josh. ha. much love <3

you guys are my favourite writers omg i s2g only 3 chapters and already peRFECTION

Both of you are very great writers. I like that it's jumping from perspectives. It'll definitely be interesting to see things coming from both character's thoughts instead of just one. Get a little insight into their heads. I'm looking forward to the next update and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

So well written, omg. Really impressed and loving this story! (: