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  • Moira Regina

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    LOVE IT!
    and thank you! for once, there's a black girl on the scene! hallelujah!
    now, I wonder who's the one to pay Beauty a visit??? hmm...
    March 10th, 2008 at 01:00am
  • Extra!!

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    the story is great :D
    March 10th, 2008 at 12:33am
  • mrsmiloventimiglia22

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    Brian quit being a screw up and fix things
    March 9th, 2008 at 04:33pm
  • Patrick Sharp

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    I really like this story =]
    And I love the fact that he isn't with a Caucasian girl.
    March 9th, 2008 at 03:47pm
  • Jade19

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    i'm really liking the story can't wait for more
    March 9th, 2008 at 09:28am
  • bloodravyn

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    I LIKE IT SO FAR
    March 9th, 2008 at 08:46am
  • You've Changed Me

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    love it its good so far
    March 9th, 2008 at 03:09am
  • Jade19

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    more please more :)
    March 9th, 2008 at 02:08am
  • xander Crews.

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    whoa, there you go again with another amazing story!
    you've got great ideas, and i love this plot + the change of characters.
    i've been wanting to get into a good A7X fic =)
    do update soon!

    <3
    March 9th, 2008 at 01:47am
  • mrsmiloventimiglia22

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    yeah you are losing control beauty.
    March 9th, 2008 at 01:24am
  • Jade19

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    i really like it can't wait for more
    March 8th, 2008 at 11:28pm
  • mrsmiloventimiglia22

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    Brian good choice wait in see what happens.
    March 8th, 2008 at 06:06pm
  • mrsmiloventimiglia22

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    Back so get on aim...

    and how could Keyarie do that. i mean she was probably in a bad situation...but still.
    March 8th, 2008 at 01:03pm
  • mrsmiloventimiglia22

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    aww more

    i am seriously going to bed now lol
    March 8th, 2008 at 05:55am
  • Hopeless Romantic

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    Nice! <333333 Brian!
    Can't wait to read more.
    March 8th, 2008 at 05:00am
  • Extra!!

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    write more!!!write mooooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 8th, 2008 at 04:08am
  • mrsmiloventimiglia22

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    lol luvvvvv it

    can't wait for more.
    March 8th, 2008 at 04:06am
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