Mermaid in a Manhole - Comments

Wow, what the hell.
I really feel the need to comment on this because that was sooooooooo different than what I find here and read. I'm so curious, I just want to know more about Kirby and Star Dust and how the hell all this stuff happens but I mean that was still pretty awesome, and random but awesome.

It flowed extremely well, I didn't know I was at the end of it or getting to the end until it was over so i'm happy with that. I'm off to go read all of the rest of your stories because that intrigued me and now I must overwhelm myself with your awesomeness. Thank you for that.

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Well, this is pretty fucking great. The drawing of Star Dust is top notch. The only problem I have with the picture, however, is that her hair isn't puke green. It is more like lime green. Lime green is a horrible colour compared to puke green. I am greatly disappointed.

Other than that, I like the layout and the characters' names are lovely. The Desperate and The Miracle, they have a nice ring to them. Also, that is a very thought provoking question. I do wonder. Keep doing what you're doing.

I fucking love your writing.

I cannot even deal with how a) hipster everything about your profile/layout/stories are but how (possibly ironically) b) your writing drips of excellence. I don't know if you know what you're doing, or if it's a happy accident, but dude... you are one talented motherfucker. Keep writing. Don't stop. Get published. Seriously.

Damn that last line! Love it and love you. :)

Dude, I'm in love with you.

I love this!

okay welp you put me to shame once again.
there is something innocent about this. different from your other stuff.
i enjoyed this, and the length. the shortnes does it justice.

XD Well that was different!

Good question. How do you do fuck a girl with a tail? Haha well this sounds interesting. Update soon!