I love the setting of this story! And I was feeling claustrophobic just from absorbing Logan's emotions through your writing. The whole time, I just needed a breath of fresh air just because I felt like Logan needed it. Kandi is really carefree and it is hard to believe that she has never been involved in the clubbing scene. She seems casual and comfortable about it for someone who's considered a newcomernof this scene. I also love how Kandi's emotions transition. The majority of the story shows how nonchalant and casual she is being just dancing like there's no tomorrow, then in the end, she gave Logan that serious affectionate look. Such a transition and it felt so real.
November 18th, 2011 at 07:01pm