Shoreline Souvenirs - Comments

It was difficult: being together but at the same time being alone.
that sentence hit me strong. Kinda made me think about this and that.
i love the cute scenes and then some spicy scenes and I really enjoyed reading this. Mostly because it's night and silent and it's well written but it made my heart beat fast too lol
(By the way, it got twice so I'm sorry. But really, this was really good and sweet to read)

It was difficult: being together but at the same time being alone.
that sentence hit me strong. Kinda made me think about this and that.
i love the cute scenes and then some spicy scenes and I really enjoyed reading this. Mostly because it's night and silent and it's well written but it made my heart beat fast too lol

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This was fantastic. I've read quite a few of yours works and every single one is just amazing. You have such a knack for writing and you are for sure one of the best authors on Mibba. (In my opinion, at least.) I don't have any criticism because it was that great and the smut was perfect. This was flawless and I can't wait to see what else you put out!

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So comment swap bought me to this and to your other Logan/kandi one shot and let me just say you're a incredible author. I loved the way you described their relationship and just everything. It was just so cute and romantic. The smut was great. It's been so long since I've read straight smut. XD But seriously good job!

This is a interesting read. Obviously there is a whole back story which I haven't read, but you've given a enough of a back story to fill in gaps for the reader. I'd have liked more description of them in the water. The feel of the waves, the tug of a current. I feel that these might add creedence to K's fear of the water. JMO. Other wise good read.

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I absolutely fell in love with the layout, I'll give you that. It's so simple and sweet and the picture that bursts with color settles nicely with the wooden background. It has a beachy sense to it. I really liked it. As far as the story itself goes, you are a brilliant writer. I've always been interested in your writing and I have to say, you are one of my favorite authors on here.

Seeing your authors note is so wrong. I feel as if it categorizes with the rest of your work and though it needs a few fixes here and there, it was a delight reading this.

Comment swap gave me this, and your other Kandi/Logan oneshot. You're an amazing author, not too much and not too little detail.

Logan's a very in-depth man, but I loved how he kept it to himself. He has more self-control than he thinks he does. And Kandi, it's so funny how she likes to bounce around and tire Logan out.

It was funny, also, how she insisted on shopping right after sex. Poor Logan. LOL.

Please write more Logan/Kandi oneshots! They're amazing!

--J

I was so excited to see one of your pieces show up in the comment swap as I am a huge fan of your work! And you didn't disappoint with this. I love your narratives, your descriptions, and your overall style, all of which were showcased in this oneshot.

I love how Logan regards Kandi, especially in the beginning. Though he wouldn’t be the first to admit it, it was always the small things he missed the most whenever they were apart, like the way she talked in her sleep or how she danced while she was cooking. is one of my favorite lines. And I just love Kandi's character. You rounded her out very nicely. She playful, yet reserved in a way. And I can just picture her with a constant, bright smile on her face.

And the smut was beyond fantastic! I found it amusing that she wanted to get up and explore some more rather than lie in bed with Logan - I don't know why. And the ending was just too cute. Loved it! <3

This layout is beautiful, by the way!

My breath is taken away! This is just, beautifully written, grammar is well!
You made a good layout, and everything you put in it was amazing.
The layout went along with it strangely.
>_>
Don't judge the layout has to amuse me.
:p

I think this is beautiful, and I love the title of the chapter. For some reason, it made me smile. I think the details are great, and I thought the pace was nice and slow without it dragging. It was a very relaxing read. I had a long-distance relationship once, and I found it was very interesting that I could relate to Logan. Overall, it's very well-written, and I enjoyed it very much.

I love the layout and how the picture played a role in the oneshot!
This oneshot is very sweet and romantic!
Logan taking his girlfriend away so he can spend time with her since she was busy with school and work while he was off on tour with his band.
He did everything that she wanted especially after the rumble between the sheets, he went with to go shopping and I thought that right there was just downright sweet!
This is a great oneshot!
Great Job!