Holding Your Heart In My Hands - Comments

  • It's a nice idea, but it seems very much a rough draft. I think you should go into more description, or at least clean it up a little bit... but otherwise? I like. It's a brain splurge of the positive variety ^_^.

    There are a few lines, such as the comment about MCR being too old for it now or the miniature rant on the emo wars which are pretty great, although undeveloped.

    And Suzi, I love how clear you made your dislike for Gerard. >_<
    March 8th, 2008 at 09:40am
  • I love it! It's a good Idea!
    *kisses each member of MCR, FOB, and PATD on the cheek*
    *kisses author on the cheek*
    I wuv it that much!
    *smiles big teeth*
    I will definately subscribe.

    oooooooooooooh! i popped your comment's cherry!
    March 8th, 2008 at 04:03am