-From the comment swap- Well the layout is uh, very bright. It hurt my eyes and made it hard to focus on the story. The overall idea of the story is interesting but I suggest you read it through or have someone read it for you to pick out the grammatical errors. I liked it though because it's pretty good and I like You Me At Six, keep writing.
comment swap- I don't usually care too much about the layout but my eyes just went O O. Took me a while to focus on the story, I couldn't stop thinking about how cool your layout is and how did you do that? But the summery was great and made me want to read more. And I really, really like it.!
This is really good =) I love the idea of it! It has just the right amount of humor, drama, and romance! At least I think there was, but this is a GREAT story, and I will most diffenetly continue to read it! Can't wait for next chapter!
You know what's funny? I was checking out your story because your name was "Stay With Me" so I assumed you had written something about someone in YMAS. So I looked & you did, so I clicked and then I clicked on the link to the picture of Amelia and that girl is actually a really huge fan of YMAS. HAHAH I'm friends with her on facebook.
I haven't yet read your story, but I'm planning on doing so now. I just had to point that out 'cause I found that hilarious! :-)