Keep Holding On - Comments

  • sainted swan

    sainted swan (100)

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    I'm sorry for making this late, but I'll make this your Valentine's Day gift from me.

    The layout is simply beautiful. I like it a lot. Especially the black background you used.

    The summary is really sweet and I'm honored to have this written for me. <3

    The oneshot was really adorable. It had its moments when I was like 'what?', 'no way', 'eeeeewhhw', and etc, but I found it weirdly adorable. This was not bad at all. I remember you told me it was bad. It's not. :P

    “I love you,” a soft, lustful lie had been whispered into his ear. It was enough. He couldn’t handle it any more. He leaned forwards, out of his boyfriend’s arms and grabbed the knife from the floor. - I found this line/sentence/short paragraph adorable. Though it was sad as well, but I still found it somewhat-weirdly-adorable. xD

    “You’re beautiful, James, you hear me? You’re not giving up on me this easy! I won’t let you! You’re the most beautiful human being I’ve ever met, why can’t you just understand it? Why can’t you see what I see? You’re so much better than you think you are. You deserve so much more than I’ll ever be able to give you. I love you, James, please, don’t do this to me.” - Now that.....that was adorable. So sad. So adorable. dljfsldjflsdkjflskdf. WHY JAMES? y u making him say that? >_<

    He finally found a reason. A reason to continue this god awful life. - YEAH. U BETTER FOUND A REASON TO LIVE, U BOOB. There is no reason to die. Nope. ~

    But it was sad and I don't like how it was about that kind of subject. It was adorable and nice and sweet, regardless. I enjoyed it. BUT U MADE ME SAD SO IHATECHU. )';

    /sucky comment is sucky./
    February 25th, 2012 at 04:16am