Ok I havent even finished the story yet and I HAVE to just comment on it allready!First of all,Ava freaking rocks!I love her.Second,Carson,ur a douche bag!AAAAAAAAHHHHH JIMMY!!!i Ok if Jimmy is in it or one of the main charecters you KNOW I'm gonna love it!I just love Jimmy he is amazing.Bri Bri!Your a horn dog Syn lol Thaaat was soooo nice of Jimmers to give Ava a place to stay.OMG!My little sweetheart Mattie!He is just adorable as adorable gets.Ok so going to finish the story of ehat you have so far.But it friggin rocks so pleeeeeae if ur nt finished with it update!Aaaah love it!
First off, I love the guys. XD They're hilarious. And I loved how Johnny was excited about not being the shortest. And Matt is just freaking adorable! I love him! ^.^ And Jimmy forcing him to ask Ava out! So cute! Loved the update! :D
im new to mibba nd ijus love yur story alredi.! 10 stars for yu =) bt jus a lil constructive critism "roared with laughter" makes me think of a viking laugh mayb a lil more subtle "she/he laughed or chuckled or giggled or hehawed or guffawed or snickered ect." wud be nice imagery actions jusayn dnt stop writing yur reali good =) cfyl (comment for you later)
im new to mibba nd ijus love yur story alredi.! 10 stars for yu =) bt jus a lil constructive critism "roared with laughter" makes me think of a viking laugh mayb a lil more subtle "she/he laughed or chuckled or giggled or hehawed or guffawed or snickered ect." wud be nice imagery actions jusayn
Jimmy's greeting was hilarious. XD And the granny bra comment was great. My favorite part. And it's awesome Ava got a job, and the way she handled her coworker. She won't have problems handling herself. Update soon please!
Achachachachacha I love Jimmy and his greetings too!! <3 Ha I love how I was eating pizza rolls -pizza none the less!!- and found out she works at a pizza joint!! Bawhhsome!!!! heehee I also have to agree with Ava on the whole not owning a granny bra!! -giggles x.x- haha I wouldn't wear one either if I were to be depressed or all the other shit that was there ^_^ I would be too lazy xP Anywho I loved it and I can't wait till you update sis <3 You are awesome ====(> ^_^)> *HUG*
Granny bras? lmfao. Jimmy you goof XD I refuse to buy/wear any bra a grandma would wear lmfao. I loved this chapter, Jimmy made my day XD Loved it :D More soon please and thank you.
I love this chapter like I just can't stop reading this!! Ohh man especially when you said “Oh Matthew, your arms are so muscly and your dimples are so adorable. I just want you to sing me to sleep after fucking my brains out with your giant horse cock.” I just fell on the floor and laughed my ass off!!!! I swear I couldn't breathe!!!!!!!! YOU ARE FUCKING AWESOME!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! <3 Ohh I hope that you update soon this story is my drug No effin Lie love!!
LOLOLOLOLOL Oh Jimmy XD That man, how he makes me laugh XD I freaking love this story! I love how adorable Matt is in this XD More soon please and thank you :D
Dude, Matt is freaking adorable! I love how he's nervous with his crush on Ava. It's so cute! I just want to pinch his cheeks. And Jimmy is hilarious as always. XD I laughed way too much at him, but that alright because I needed a pick me up after all the depressing stories I've read today. Loved it! Update soon please.