A Joker's Card - Comments

That was pretty great so far.The backround picture was flipping amazing.I love the Joker and am quite the joker fan fic addict.So this one seems like it will be different.I subscribed and I can't wait to see what you do with this. =)

I like how you can't see anything until you clicked on the chapter link and the pictures just popped out, aha. I have one minor nit-pick though, and that's just to do with the title. I think it's meant to be the Joker's card, not the 'Jokers' card, because 'jokers' would imply that there's more than one joker while 'joker's' implies that the card belongs to the joker, ya know? Anyway, great first chapter! You managed to capture the Joker's sadistic personality pretty well, as how he loves hearing the town's scream echo in his ears. It just really highlights his inhumanity and just sent chills down my spine, aha! Good job so far :)