Before the Dawn - Comments, page 2

a_a_a_a_a_ (100)

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lol new reader xD.

This story rocks! ^^

March 18th, 2008 at 06:42pm

Angelus. (100)

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and allsssoo, if Gerard wants to 'make love' to Frankie, surely that means he loves him?

Even if he does, you know, wanna KILL HIM.

lol

:D

XOXOXOX

March 17th, 2008 at 01:33am

Angelus. (100)

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dun dun DUUUHHH

I was only keeping him warm so his blood would be fresher, not because I cared about him and wanted him to be safe.
Sure Gerard, you just keep telling yourself that...

Love this... is Mikey his brother in this story?

Can't wait for the next update!

xoxoxoxoxoxox

March 17th, 2008 at 01:33am

Evelyn Shadows (100)

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oooh i like this A LOTTT
honestly... who invented cliffhangers?
more pweaseeee
x x x x x x

March 12th, 2008 at 09:56pm

Angelus. (100)

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mmm Gerard likey....

DAMMIT! why did you leave it there? do you LIKE torturing your loving readers?

hurUMPH

XOXOX

March 12th, 2008 at 12:45am

NecyMorphine?!?! (100)

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yeah write more this is awesome i wonder wats gonna happen w/ frerard

March 8th, 2008 at 06:18pm

Angelus. (100)

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COMMENT VIRGNINITY!!!!!

YES you should definitely continue :D (and maybe make it more than a few chapters?)

byyyy the way, I don't know if you realised, but you repeated the same text twice in that first chapter.

More soon?

xoxoxoxoxoxox

March 8th, 2008 at 03:36pm