Before the Dawn - Comments

lol new reader xD.

This story rocks! ^^

and allsssoo, if Gerard wants to 'make love' to Frankie, surely that means he loves him?
Even if he does, you know, wanna KILL HIM.

lol

:D

XOXOXOX

dun dun DUUUHHH

I was only keeping him warm so his blood would be fresher, not because I cared about him and wanted him to be safe.
Sure Gerard, you just keep telling yourself that...

Love this... is Mikey his brother in this story?

Can't wait for the next update!

xoxoxoxoxoxox

oooh i like this A LOTTT
honestly... who invented cliffhangers?
more pweaseeee
x x x x x x

mmm Gerard likey....

DAMMIT! why did you leave it there? do you LIKE torturing your loving readers?

hurUMPH

XOXOX

yeah write more this is awesome i wonder wats gonna happen w/ frerard

COMMENT VIRGNINITY!!!!!

YES you should definitely continue :D (and maybe make it more than a few chapters?)

byyyy the way, I don't know if you realised, but you repeated the same text twice in that first chapter.

More soon?

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