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  • xlivexfoREVerx

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    ahh please write more!!! I followed this story when you first uploaded it. Don't leave us hanging!! :D
    November 11th, 2016 at 12:37am
  • mcrzluver

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    This is such a good story. I really hope to read more.
    September 19th, 2016 at 10:38pm
  • Candy_land

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    I'm really starting to get into this story. I like dominant possessive zacky. Really looking forward to reading more. The only bit of critisim I have is that sometimes the characters are a bit washy, they sort of go back and forth really suddenly and change their personality. Zack goes from being sweet to nasty, from wanting her around him constantly but also doesn't want her at all.
    July 31st, 2015 at 12:39pm
  • mcrzluver

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    Ok. I think he's starting to see his errors now. And by the way I freaking LOVE this story! Please update it soon!
    January 4th, 2015 at 07:00am
  • mcrzluver

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    So far Zacky is an asshole in this story. I'm only on chapter 10 though. I hope he's not like that through the whole thing.
    January 4th, 2015 at 06:38am
  • RoverrrRadke

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    Update soon please! This story is absolutely terrific and I want to know what's going to happen with Daphne and Zacky after the baby is born.
    December 28th, 2012 at 06:49pm
  • undeadd

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    ermahgurrd. dis is omazin.
    December 28th, 2012 at 03:45am
  • UnicornVenom

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    Please update! I spent all noght reading this story and i'm obsessed! I'm right dying to know what's going to happen and what all these family secrets are! Please write! Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!
    December 27th, 2012 at 06:05am
  • xxTillMyLastBreathxx

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    agree with the post below me... more please!!!! <3 :)
    October 7th, 2012 at 06:47am
  • hearts_you

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    More please!
    September 23rd, 2012 at 12:03pm
  • caligirl1605

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    Awesome update! Can't wait for more!
    September 11th, 2012 at 07:39am
  • efflorescxnt

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    OOHMYGODD<3 Love this story so much<3 You have to update.. now.. NOW!<3
    August 22nd, 2012 at 08:14am
  • madwomanwithabox

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    So like... I check this story like 8 times a week to see if you posted anything.. so you like.. should. c:
    August 11th, 2012 at 06:00am
  • ellievengeance

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    so I like this story :D
    I like your little twists that make it unique.
    There are a good bit of spelling/grammatical mistakes,
    but not so much I wanted to send you back to english class :D
    If I weren't a lazy butt monkey, I'd send you a list,
    but alas,
    lazy butt monkey-r-us.
    anywhoo keep it up love!
    July 19th, 2012 at 01:56pm
  • AvyD

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    So I just caught up on this story. I love all the drama. This is a really great story so far. I cant wait for more.
    July 19th, 2012 at 07:55am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Wow Daphne's father sure scary.
    Zacky better say what he says and meet him on Monday.
    Great update :)
    July 16th, 2012 at 06:47am
  • hidans_hoe

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    (Comment swap!)
    First of all, I love Avenged Sevenfold. I've seen them live and they're amazing. I also adore the title and layout. Very intriguing. I also love the way you dated each chapter. Genius! The idea of the story is so unique and awesome. Your writing is flawless. The description during the sex scene is wonderful. I love the line "She could feel his cold rings against her warm skin." This is fantastic!
    July 14th, 2012 at 03:37am
  • KiddoOverload

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    I'm drawned into this story I NEED to know what happens!!! more please!
    July 8th, 2012 at 08:10am
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    omg why did you stop there!!!!
    Update soon
    July 6th, 2012 at 12:10pm
  • stallion duck.

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    Jumping for joy that you updated. :)
    July 5th, 2012 at 05:55pm
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