Barely Legal. - Comments

ahh please write more!!! I followed this story when you first uploaded it. Don't leave us hanging!! :D

This is such a good story. I really hope to read more.

I'm really starting to get into this story. I like dominant possessive zacky. Really looking forward to reading more. The only bit of critisim I have is that sometimes the characters are a bit washy, they sort of go back and forth really suddenly and change their personality. Zack goes from being sweet to nasty, from wanting her around him constantly but also doesn't want her at all.

Ok. I think he's starting to see his errors now. And by the way I freaking LOVE this story! Please update it soon!

So far Zacky is an asshole in this story. I'm only on chapter 10 though. I hope he's not like that through the whole thing.

Update soon please! This story is absolutely terrific and I want to know what's going to happen with Daphne and Zacky after the baby is born.

ermahgurrd. dis is omazin.

Please update! I spent all noght reading this story and i'm obsessed! I'm right dying to know what's going to happen and what all these family secrets are! Please write! Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!

agree with the post below me... more please!!!! <3 :)

More please!

Awesome update! Can't wait for more!

OOHMYGODD<3 Love this story so much<3 You have to update.. now.. NOW!<3

So like... I check this story like 8 times a week to see if you posted anything.. so you like.. should. c:

so I like this story :D
I like your little twists that make it unique.
There are a good bit of spelling/grammatical mistakes,
but not so much I wanted to send you back to english class :D
If I weren't a lazy butt monkey, I'd send you a list,
but alas,
lazy butt monkey-r-us.
anywhoo keep it up love!

So I just caught up on this story. I love all the drama. This is a really great story so far. I cant wait for more.

Wow Daphne's father sure scary.
Zacky better say what he says and meet him on Monday.
Great update :)

(Comment swap!)
First of all, I love Avenged Sevenfold. I've seen them live and they're amazing. I also adore the title and layout. Very intriguing. I also love the way you dated each chapter. Genius! The idea of the story is so unique and awesome. Your writing is flawless. The description during the sex scene is wonderful. I love the line "She could feel his cold rings against her warm skin." This is fantastic!

I'm drawned into this story I NEED to know what happens!!! more please!

omg why did you stop there!!!!
Update soon

Jumping for joy that you updated. :)