Ahhh, looking forward to seeing the changes you'll make :D But don't leave us waiting too long please! I love this story, well done and good luck rebooting it!
I don't think you understand how happy you just made me! You just made my freaking day, the very start of my day! It's 12:20 where I'm at, so now I can go to bed with a large smile on my face. Not gonna lie, I forgot all about this story, but as soon as I saw the layout, I remembered EVERYTHING! I am look forward to your reboot
I'm so sorry that I haven't given you input until now! I completely forgot until you messaged me again, haha. But I'll start with saying that I like the layout for this story better than the first one. (:
I'm so glad that she ran away. Matt was a complete and utter lunatic in your last story and honestly, I don't want her to end up with him. He needs to be hospitalized for being crazy and if I remember correctly, didn't he kill her best friend? (I probably should have re-read the first part but I didn't have much time.) I don't know, I just didn't like him the first time around and I don't want her to be with him because, even if he is Matt Sanders, he's psycho.
But Asher sounds lovely. He protects her and accepts the past she had (it sounds like he knew about it), so I like him.
So, in the first chapter, the flashback seemed a bit... unreal to me. Like how she met Asher. Mostly because she willingly agrees to go back to his house with him after having been kidnapped and raped and stuff, you know? I mean, yeah, I get that she was terrified of Matt finding her, and she said she didn't trust him but going home with him seems a bit trusting to me. If I was her, I probably would have kept going and went to the police and busted Matt for everything that he did.
Though I do like Asher more than Matt, it almost seems like he's really protective of her. Like, overprotective. Possibly could turn into a problem, but I'm only on the first chapter, so we'll see.
MATT IS WATCHING HER. Hide yo kids, hide yo wife~ Haha, but seriously, I'm not sure I'm excited to see Matt in the next chapter. It's going to get crazy and I'm definitely positive that Asher and Matt are not going to like each other. I hope Asher wins. Team Asher!
Your welcome for the comment thank you for the shout out. Great chapter I really liked it. I wonder if Asher is hiding somethinf from Harmony because he does seem to be too perfect. I can't wait for Matt to come into the story and I have a feeling he was the one she ran into on her way home. I hope you udpate soon!
I really like this story. I feel bad for Harmony because she lost her family and doesn't have anybody besides Asher and it is all Matt's fault but no matter what he will always have a part of her heart. I wonder when Harmony is going to see Matt again. I can't wait for more update soon!
Good update!! Can't wait to see what happens next! btw, I was the 1st person to EVER read this story, read it when she was writing it on paper! I have ownage XD