Stage Five - Comments

Snow day? Lucky... I walked all the way to my bus stop in the god damn rain, waited there for twenty minutes, until my dad walked down the street and told me buses were cancelled due to freezing rain...

Ugh.

But this update! WHOOT! What I wouldn't give to play COD with Sid...
Definitely not a Halo girl over here ;)

Awesome story! Can't wait for more!

So I'm really liking this. I love the dynamic of Sidney and a younger girl, as it adds some danger and some sexyness to everything. I do hope you update soon!!

This is probably my favorite story of yours that you have written (I also love double booked!) It's such a great, well written, story. Please update soon!

like the way this is going! hope to read more soon!!

I loved the update! I really hope that you update soon because i can wait for more! :)

finally!!! i missed this story so much it's one of my favorites! (i'm supposed to be studying, but i took an extra long break just to read it)

Sometimes, when I get sad, I stop being sad, and become every single one of your characters instead.
Because they are awesome, and I totally wish I have their fictional life...
:) Thank you for making me un-sad for estimated time it took me to read that chapter!
<3

Sometimes, when I get sad, I stop being sad, and become every single one of your characters instead.
Because they are awesome, and I totally wish I have their fictional life...
:) Thank you for making me un-sad for estimated time it took me to read that chapter!
<3

literally every girls dream.

LOVE IT! can't wait for another update

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

This story has really hooked me. I really enjoyed your update.

Its driving me a little nuts that he didnt try and kiss her - but I am figuring that is what you were going for.

Well done!!

This chapter was brilliant. I was giggling like a twelve year old as I read it (and that's a high praise....trust me). The banter between them was witty and well done. You write dialog between the characters really well. It never comes off as forced or anything like it. It always seems to be so natural. It just flows.

Sidney was the perfect gentleman, but I wouldn't expect anything less from the likes of him. I like that you're building the tension between them without having them have rushed straight into all the nitty gritty aspects of it.

Once again, that was fantastic, and I can't wait to see where this story goes. oxox

-Mandy

So glad you updated!!

Aaaahhhh I loved it! Really good! So glad you updated :)

It has been so long since I've come across a story on this website that I fell in love with from the first few words. I really adore this. The writing is wonderful, the character's are nice and fleshed out, which is amazing considering there are only three chapters so far. I also love the age gap thing. Does that make me weird? It's an original conflict to have in fanfiction because from what I've seen, most people don't like taking risks like that in their stories, and I applaud you for doing it. It can go so many different ways, and I for one would love to see it play out.

I do hope you continue, even though it's been about two months since your last update. This story is totally worth telling! oxox

-Mandy

Please update this soon. I can't wait to read more!

Awesome update! Can't wait to read more :)

i'm subscribed to every one of your stories and I really really like dis one(: heheheh please update