When I Hear Your Cries. - Comments

whisper_death (100)

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U should start writing this again it's really good and it could go so many ways from here

July 3rd, 2013 at 01:13am

LastOneStanding (100)

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I love this!!! You need to start writing this again!!!!!

March 31st, 2012 at 10:11pm

soldmysoultomusic (100)

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I love it <3
You definitely should make this a story :)

November 11th, 2011 at 08:07am

Bluebirdofhappiness (100)

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I.LOVE.THIS!!! I have to say it's a really good short story though, with the dramtic twist at the end, but maybe just a little more would make it even more intresting. BTW I love Andy! :3

November 5th, 2011 at 11:01pm

Malady. (100)

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omg i lovee thiss!!! WRITEE MOREEE D:

November 4th, 2011 at 08:27pm

Johnny B (100)

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LOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS! I think you should make this into a story. I'd love to read it.

November 4th, 2011 at 03:02am