Broken Bird - Comments

I can't believe I forgot that you updated
I'm a noob, what can I say?

BLAINE!!
Gotta love 'im.
This was a really cute chapter, the ending anyways. I absolutely love the way you express their relationships and how you make it come across through the events in the story. As usual, I loved the chapter! Cannot wait 'til you update this!

I forgot to subscribe again
But this I did it before reading the chapter

I loved the update. I think you got Rachel very spot on. Have I told you yet that I absolutely love Kurt's monologue? Because I do. For me, it makes the story. My favorite part of this update was when Rachel told Curt that it was okay to not be okay. It was cute.

And final note:
::crazy
BLAINE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

I didn't know you updated this!
Should probably put it on my subscription list.

I loved the update. I don't think I really have anything negatives about this chapter--well besides Blaine not being in it, but he can't be in every chapter now can he? And I personally wouldn't worry about trying to keep the season "normal". The show never is. Cannot wait until you get the motivation to write the next chapter. I am not very patient with this story But I will try and learn to be, because I know how it is.

Ah, I didn't forget about reading this story! I swear!
My laptop ended up dying. :(
I just got it fixed for Christmas.

Okay, so this is kind of a 'page-turner'. I really want to see how he is going to work through everything. There is a part of me that wants you to write longer chapters but at the same time the shorter chapters don't overwhelm me and makes me want to read it. I really want to see more of Blaine in this story-he's only been in one chapter :(. I want to see him react more around Kurt. I want to see that bond. But mostly because I am a sucker for Kurt and Blaine. Though I must say I do like how you have Blaine react toe everything. I can see him really doing it if this ever actually happened to Kurt--god forbid. The same goes with Kurt. I can see him acting like everything is fine, putting on a front. I think the only thing I have an issue with is the parentheses/brackets. I think you use them too much and at the wrong moments. But other then that I love it. I kind of already knew I would though. :P