I just read this entire thing again, I love it that much. "Property of M. Shadows"...he could tatt that on me any time he wants ;) damn they're so perfect together.
Damn, your Bratt is DIVINE. This is delicious for so many reasons. I typically write a strong Brian, but I totally dig your princess Brian. Guh. So . Awesome. And of course, who doesn't want their dom to be M.?
Oh Brian, I feel you bro! Damn game has interfered in my sex life SO many times! ‘It was not going to suck itself.’ XD *Goes in search of the toaster* I love the names he calls Matt! Haha Okay, this story is making me LOL! I agree, dominant/angry/protective/jealous Matt is hot as all hell! I spent probably three quarters of the story lolling and then Matt’s all ‘he’s my bitch not yours’ and I’m like okay that’s hot! no words. I guess I just love angry men. XD Oh Matt! Show your inner beast to me! *swoons like a pathetic girl* Aw Bri, come here and let me pet your pretty hair, we can shit talk Matt and eat ice cream together. Okay, that’s hot. Oh Brian, I fucking love you! You tell him! *shakes fist* Yes! Haha! Best damn pregnant guy ever! I do the whole ‘time of the month thing’ too Brian I want to hug you! Be my best friend? XD I have this image in my head of Brian rubbing himself up against the wall Okay, now it’s me rubbing up against the furniture like a damn cat! Jesus! Nice touch Matt. I like it.
Everyone needs to bow to the fucking epicness that is this story! Princess Brian is the best! You are definitely living up to your title as Queen. I’m so going to whore the shit out of this story, I love it with all my little black heart. xD
Eu amei. Sinceramente? O mais perfeito Bratt que já li. Uma pena que não haverá uma sequencia. E por um momento achei que haveria mpreg, sério KK' Parabéns!
This was just brilliant. So many emotions were tossed around in there and the pace of the story was perfect. I really liked how you kept on crossing out the previous 'names' and put a new one, showing the change and reminding me of how Brian used to view that person or feel about them. It was a hectic ride, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. It seemed so real too, and to me, that's pretty crazy, yet so amazing that you can write like that. At first I hated Matt so much, then I ended up hating Brian for what he was doing, and then I just loved them both. Unbelievable how much you could influence my thinking with your words. It was seriously so good to read, and you are possibly making me become a fan of Bratt now lol so congrats :)
Aww! This story was amazing! I LOVE protective/dominant/jealous Matt! Like hottest thing ever, it's just a fact! And when he's being that for Brian? Delicious! I loved this story so much! Freaking amazing!
Holy mother of chocolate.... That was probably the best one-shot - NO; story I have ever, ever, eeeveeer read D: You created such a complex story line. Really, really, really well written :) :D
This was an absolutely amazing slash one-shot. In fact...It very may well be one of the best Avenged Sevenfold slash stories on this site. I loved how you gave both Matt and Brian very different personalities, but still maintained who I envision them to be in real life. I think that added a lot to the story. I also really enjoyed seeing how, despite their differences and Brian's impatience with Matt and his love of video games, they were able to show each other how much they love one another in their own little ways during the sex scene--which, I might add, was completely sexy. I seriously needed a cold shower after reading this, and that hasn't happened to me very often when reading smut. I really enjoyed being able to read this and I'm definitely gonna read some more of your stories. :)
whatta fuck?? i don't think that i've EVER enjoyed reading a story as much as i enjoyed this one.. Brian being all girly is just fricking hilarious and epic! All the princess things were just so amusing <3 MMmmm dominated by Matt... hot-damn!! and the marking.. all kinds of crazy and hot :D
like i've said before, not really a fan of Slash BUT your ''Bratt'' stories.. i can't help but lovin them millions!! <3