I haven't read your story, I am going around randomly recommending stories, as you do, but I have read your status and if you feel you want to re-write then go for it. At the end of the day you want to produce something YOU are proud of. If you have ideas to make this even better than it already is, I don't the reason why you wouldn't do so. Hope that helps :)
October 5th, 2014 at 01:40am