Skeleton Eyes - Comments

Very different from what I normally read, for sure. A bit sad and depressing, but that doesn't detract from your ability to write or my opinion of the story.

You used a good balance of description and dialogue, allowing enough for the reader to build and absorb the setting.

It's interesting, I've been getting a lot of these lately and it's a little depressing but they're all very good so I guess it's worth it. I like how you seem detailed but not overwhelming in detail, which is hard to manage because there's a thin boundary and it's really hard to not cross it but you did it well.

Meow.
Continue this one please c:

I really like this. Update soon!!!
<3

anorexia themed I'm guessing? continue darling