September 20th, 2012 at 11:03am
Skeleton Eyes - Comments
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It's interesting, I've been getting a lot of these lately and it's a little depressing but they're all very good so I guess it's worth it. I like how you seem detailed but not overwhelming in detail, which is hard to manage because there's a thin boundary and it's really hard to not cross it but you did it well.July 9th, 2012 at 09:59pm
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Meow.
Continue this one please c:December 1st, 2011 at 10:53pm -
I really like this. Update soon!!!
<3December 1st, 2011 at 09:01pm -
anorexia themed I'm guessing? continue darlingDecember 1st, 2011 at 07:49pm
You used a good balance of description and dialogue, allowing enough for the reader to build and absorb the setting.