thanks! That really helped. I'll make sure I do it next time I write.
November 14th, 2011 at 09:56pm
A few comments to start off. I would suggest learning how to make layouts -- it's so easy, I'm sure you can! -- or having someone make a layout for you. The premade layouts here do not suit most peoples' tastes, and people love to see ones that you have made yourself!
Put spaces in-between your paragraphs. Even after every new person speaks, you need a new paragraph. Be sure to go back over every chapter and look for grammar and spelling mistakes. I didn't see too many but it's just something every author can do to improve their work!
Make sure to stick to one tense, past -- he did, he was, he went -- or present -- he does, he is, he goes -- for the entire story!
