AHAHAHAHAHAHGHHHHHRJSJEKDJSN PAT AND AJ. It's just so perfect. I love them. Poor John doesn't know what he did. In a way I'm glad she did that case now she is just going to be fighting herself the whole tour. Can't wait for the next update. And yeahhhh you finished it.
awww pat and AJ are too cute together im glad she set them up ;) but she shouldnt of run away from john like that :/ she should run back into his arms! cant wait for more <3
I was smiling the whole way through the part where I meet Pat. He is just so cute. I felt bad for John when he saw her kissing someone else but it was good they had that talk. I love the chapter and can't wait for the next one.
Not going to lie I am really happy you decided to keep it going. I'm going to message you some ideas cause I wouldn't want to give away anything. I am getting so excited for my character to meet Pat. OMG I HAVE SO MUCH TO TELL YOU.
yesss this story cant leave us!! :D is jamie gonna get wasted and tell him how much she still loves him or something like that? or something bad...? i dont know but i have a feeling that there will be some drama in pats party D: and chapter more frequent would be nice ;) cant wait for more <3
I think u should finish this story first thn publish this story but change the names of course....I like this chapter....can't wait to read the next chapter :) .......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I would really like you to keep the story up, but then again, I definitely think you'd have a shot at getting published if you changed a few names and what not. Can't wait for the next chapter!