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  • Zombiexlollipop

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    I love how protective Craig is <3
    And Craig and Ronnie working together will be interesting.
    May 18th, 2012 at 03:20pm
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    Next chapter* GAH!
    May 3rd, 2012 at 08:30am
  • for i have syn

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    This chapter was awesome! >.< The tension of this story is getting so high! Can't wait for the next story.
    May 3rd, 2012 at 08:30am
  • Hottopic97

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    update:)
    April 29th, 2012 at 05:03am
  • mshadowslover

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    I'm not being mean, but, I think you are spending way too much time on Kayla's story when this is supposed to be about Craig and Rae. It's been at least 3 chapters without Rae or Craig's POV. Try to bring in their POV for the next chapter so you don't lose your reader's interest. :o)
    April 21st, 2012 at 04:27pm
  • banana sykes.

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    She died!! Oh my gosh !! Update soon please!
    March 16th, 2012 at 05:26am
  • AnnieArchie

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    Well fuuuuuuuck me, this plot just took a twist! Can't wait to see what Miss Kayla says about Max to Sabbath!
    More please! <3
    March 15th, 2012 at 05:40am
  • laceyvengeance

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    Max is such an asshole. But I kind of understand his logic too, but if he could've controlled his anger, then he wouldn't be in the situation he is in.
    March 12th, 2012 at 04:09am
  • AnnieArchie

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    You little tease, with that kind of cliffhanger! More more more please! <3
    March 9th, 2012 at 10:10pm
  • CharmedLuna

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    NOOOOOOO

    Kayla.... you died!!!! hahaha

    not yet anyway.
    March 9th, 2012 at 07:06am
  • ThisWarIsOurs7528

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    I love how this is sort of traditional vampires, and not the sexualized, glamourized vampires from Hollywood.
    February 20th, 2012 at 06:45pm
  • CharmedLuna

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    :O

    Ronnie! Damn! Shit is going to hit the fan soon!
    February 10th, 2012 at 08:07am
  • for i have syn

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    Holy shit! RADKE!? Ronnie is gonna be in the story too!!!!??? You didn't tell me that!!!!! I'm gonna spank your ass when I see you! I cannot wait to find out what happens next!
    February 10th, 2012 at 07:54am
  • CharmedLuna

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    Girl time is much needed! Rae needs to make
    sure her friends are all right and that Craig has
    kept his word :D
    January 24th, 2012 at 06:30am
  • laceyvengeance

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    I hope Kayla has been giving Max hell back for what he's doing to her..haha c:
    January 24th, 2012 at 05:26am
  • CharmedLuna

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    If I was in her place, then I would be like her. The idea of vampire existing and being a prisoner would freak me out!
    January 18th, 2012 at 12:00am
  • Rotten In Vogue

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    Awesome shiz
    January 16th, 2012 at 02:36pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    great update
    January 14th, 2012 at 03:57pm
  • for i have syn

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    >.< Gah! Craig!!! What is going on in that mind of yours? I just have some many feelings and thoughts of where this will go but, I don't know... It can can anywhere at this point. And he's revealed that he's a vampire!! XD I would laugh if he told me he was a vampire. I would have thought he has some mental issues or something. I can't wait to see what happens next. I lub you, Kayla!
    January 14th, 2012 at 10:15am
  • for i have syn

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    Okay, so... is Craig a good guy or a bad guy? What's he gonna do? I'm full of questions and I want to know!! And I can't believe his friends would drag Kari and Kayla into this! What's gonna happen!?!?! This story is getting more intense with every chapter.
    January 11th, 2012 at 08:39am
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