City of Sin - Comments

Loved this! More please!

Ay dios mio! Robert is abusing Kari. All of the girls are scared, and I would definitely be too. I hope Kayla gets through it ok. This story keeps getting better and better

Well, that confirmed my thoughts of Craig being a vampire, although, I didn't think he would bite her so soon, but I guess that if he didn't he could have lost her.

I loved this!

Holy shit! That was amazing! I didn't think he would bite her so soon. Well I knew he was a vampire, and that's all I gave away to Rae! And yeah like Rae said, it's no Twilight shit, haha. Love this!

Bit* (fuck my auto-correct)

What the-! Craig's a wha?! Even though I knew since Kari said it but still, the way Rae found out! I was thinking, "oh some sexy is gonna happen" then Craig but her! Rae is really upset! I would be pissed off too. This ain't no twilight shit! Lol, ah, I wanna know what Craig is scheming! That sexy hot son of a bitch! XD can't wait for the next update, Kayla!

Ok, I'm gonna comment on the banner before reading. It's fucking awesome! You gotta send me a link so I can use it as a wallpaper on my comp! XD ok, gonna read it!!!!

Dancing in a horizontal position with no clothes..haha I like it. c:

OH SHIT!! I have to say I fricken love that part Rae said the kind of dancing she does involves no clothes in a horizontal position. >.< I'd say that if fucking Craig Mabbitt came up to me in a club. Woo! Damn, I never been this turned on by him in a while. LoL.I love this, Kayla!!! And I had so much fun today! :)

I really love this story!

more please

The first chapter was really good! Can't wait for the second chapter! c:

I can't wait for more! This is going to be the best Craig story on mibba ever!

I loved it! I know this is going to be a kick ass story!

The first chapter was good, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.

This seems really interesting. I can't wait for the first chapter. :)

YES, YES, YES!
I cannot wait!
*Subscribed*

I'm going to faint because this looks so awesome! Oh my God! WOW! This is fricken unbelievable! I like want to faint, wake up and faint again! Thank you!!! I should keep picking you up for more stories. LoL. :D