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  • Synyster Gates;

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    Loved this! More please!
    January 11th, 2012 at 08:14am
  • CharmedLuna

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    Ay dios mio! Robert is abusing Kari. All of the girls are scared, and I would definitely be too. I hope Kayla gets through it ok. This story keeps getting better and better
    January 11th, 2012 at 08:04am
  • laceyvengeance

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    Well, that confirmed my thoughts of Craig being a vampire, although, I didn't think he would bite her so soon, but I guess that if he didn't he could have lost her.
    January 9th, 2012 at 12:10am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I loved this!
    January 8th, 2012 at 05:57pm
  • CharmedLuna

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    Holy shit! That was amazing! I didn't think he would bite her so soon. Well I knew he was a vampire, and that's all I gave away to Rae! And yeah like Rae said, it's no Twilight shit, haha. Love this!
    January 8th, 2012 at 08:27am
  • for i have syn

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    Bit* (fuck my auto-correct)
    January 8th, 2012 at 08:09am
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    What the-! Craig's a wha?! Even though I knew since Kari said it but still, the way Rae found out! I was thinking, "oh some sexy is gonna happen" then Craig but her! Rae is really upset! I would be pissed off too. This ain't no twilight shit! Lol, ah, I wanna know what Craig is scheming! That sexy hot son of a bitch! XD can't wait for the next update, Kayla!
    January 8th, 2012 at 08:06am
  • for i have syn

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    Ok, I'm gonna comment on the banner before reading. It's fucking awesome! You gotta send me a link so I can use it as a wallpaper on my comp! XD ok, gonna read it!!!!
    January 8th, 2012 at 07:49am
  • laceyvengeance

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    Dancing in a horizontal position with no clothes..haha I like it. c:
    January 6th, 2012 at 03:37am
  • for i have syn

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    OH SHIT!! I have to say I fricken love that part Rae said the kind of dancing she does involves no clothes in a horizontal position. >.< I'd say that if fucking Craig Mabbitt came up to me in a club. Woo! Damn, I never been this turned on by him in a while. LoL.I love this, Kayla!!! And I had so much fun today! :)
    January 4th, 2012 at 06:32am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I really love this story!
    January 4th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • Star Angel

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    more please
    January 3rd, 2012 at 10:55pm
  • laceyvengeance

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    The first chapter was really good! Can't wait for the second chapter! c:
    January 1st, 2012 at 10:58pm
  • for i have syn

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    I can't wait for more! This is going to be the best Craig story on mibba ever!
    January 1st, 2012 at 01:19am
  • CharmedLuna

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    I loved it! I know this is going to be a kick ass story!
    December 31st, 2011 at 09:58pm
  • Issues

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    The first chapter was good, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.
    December 31st, 2011 at 02:55pm
  • Issues

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    This seems really interesting. I can't wait for the first chapter. :)
    December 18th, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • IcRaVeVeNgEaNcE

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    YES, YES, YES!
    I cannot wait!
    *Subscribed*
    November 28th, 2011 at 06:56am
  • for i have syn

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    I'm going to faint because this looks so awesome! Oh my God! WOW! This is fricken unbelievable! I like want to faint, wake up and faint again! Thank you!!! I should keep picking you up for more stories. LoL. :D
    November 7th, 2011 at 06:36am
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