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Thank the heavens she took care of his mother. That bitch was evil.

I am so slow I just read chapter 27 tonight x.x I'm gonna update tomorrow and you better update with me or I'm gonna form my own little mob and come after you hahaha

aklsfjkasfl i would beat his mother's ass -_- hell, i would beat anyones as if they did that to my gf or bf. :O! well anyway, i like this story!(: <3

keep, keep them all. and update

This could just be me...but I still don't know what was wrong with Derek. Like why was he in the hospital and all weird and stuff. I feel like I should know, but the information is missing in my brain haha

This could just be me...but I still d

Hmm... I'd like to say....
She's gonna be mentally fucking them over.
Hah.
But hey an adorable baby would be adorable.

His family are some son of a bitches lol

So i didn't get a notification till last night.
-_-
Blonde bitch better stay the fuck away from Derek...
Cause his mom is gonna make left foot bitch make a move on her son.
It's not hard to tell what she's gonna make em do.

OMG, what are they planning? I neeed to know plz plz plzzzz!

Amazing update!!! Keep it up!

i want more of franks mom. and someone call 911 in advance

somethings gonna happen, somethings gonna happen so please update please update

there's some grammatical error and immaturity in your writing, but it has genuine effort and it's getting better and better as the story progresses. sometimes writers mature as they continue a story, so i'd encourage you to go back and read through your first chapter, see if changes should be made. I do that with my stories, so it might help.
Anyways, this story has great potential.
Keep it up.

I love the story so much and keep writting your very good at it:]

This story is amazing. I love it!

I had a twilight flash back myself, update soon

Sweet updat:)

update soon!

i bet matt knew because the house smelled like sex. and her brother is gonna kill him. lol im laughing. anyway update plz