Familiar Breath of My Old Lies - Comments

seventeen: Cute chapter. Descriptions were great. Wondering what will happen next? Can't wait to find out.

sixteen: Cute that she's going to hook Cody up with her friend kelsey. Will he like her? Wondering why she's been so out of shape? Can't wait to read and find out.

fifteen: Happy belated Congrats on graduation. Another great chapter. Wondering what will happen next? Can't wait to find out.

fourteen: Cute chapter. What's going on with Jimmy and Little miss user? Can't wait to find out more.

thirteen: They make a cute couple. Wondering what Jimmy's thinking about the two of them being together? Wondering what will happen next? Can't wait to find out.

twelve: All I can say about this chapter is pure perfection. Everything about it was excellent; the emotion, the fights *favorite by the way*, the drama...and anything else I forgot to mention. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

eleven: It may have been short, but it did give us a filler of what's been going on...or something like that. Wondering what are they going to talk about? Can't wait to read and find out.

ten: Okay, so I haven't picked a Favorite Chapter yet; but now I am and it's this one. Wishing Brian did let her go so she could give 'Little Miss User' a good face implant of the bruised type. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to find out.

nine: My guess is he fell for a groupie after all. Found one mistake; don't worry, it's nothing big...{...and I hand my arms around his neck.} Just take out the 'n' for had. Besides that; a great chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.

eight: Loved everything about this chapter. From the 'let's talk about our paast love lives' to the 'stay away from my sister; giving you a murderous glares'. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to find out,

seven: Holy cuteness. A great chapter. Descriptions where perfect. Forgot to mention that I love the background image. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

six: Liked this chapter. Loved the conscience part and the drama part. Descriptions were okay. Also loved how Austin played the 'so...you and my sister; i don't like it so I'll glare at you' card; cuteness. Wondering what will happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

five: This one is excellent; a lot of stuff going on; yet not too much *me meaning drama; it's a favorite of mine*. Descriptions were perfect. Wondering what was Cody's expressions as she left? Could've put that in there as well. Anyways, can't wait to read the next chapter.

four: I'm going to honestly say that this wasn't my favorite; reason is because there wasn't a lot going on... hoping that there's more in the next few chapters. The descriptions though were perfect. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

three: Another excellent chapter. Wondering what's going to happen when they meet A7X? Can't wait to read and find out.

two: Great chapter. Loved the descriptions of the guys and their dorm leader. Wondering what's going to happen next? What are the guys going to do while they're gone? Can't wait to read and find out.

Sounds interesting. Like that it's kinda of in a diary format; at least I think so. Wondering what's going to happen next? Liked the descriptions of everything. Question: Austin? I know he's her brother and all; but what is he's part exactly. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I would like to make a sequel to it...

It depends on how much time I have...
I start college tommorrow.

oh.my.god.!!! i say you make a sequal of mahaley (spelling?) and parkers friends ship and what its lik to grow up with avenged..but thats just me. i loved it :D

yay babies!!! I wanna marry austin....:( oh well, he belongs to someone else!!

SO SAD ITS OVER!!! I loved this story! It's amazing!!!