Love this story - there is a real chemistry between them. I hope they see that there is something more between them than a "fake boyfriend/girlfriend" relationship.
I had a roommate like Harper...kinda I guess....she kept saying she didnt have money so I would help out with the rent but then I found out that her parents were paying all her tuition. It wasnt cool.
And that game this morning was awesome - a little bit of everything. I just hope Sami is ok
Every time I read this I start to wish that Beth was a real person since I think we'd get along great and every time Harper opens her mouth I feel like I just want to sucker punch her. Please keep these updates coming
I just found this story and it's amazing! No joke. If Harper was real, I would punch her. She's so irritating! She shouldn't get ANYTHING from their house since Beth had to work 3 jobs for it!! She should be ashamed of herself, not parading around acting like she's all high and mighty!! But anyways, Steven and Beth are so cute :] I hope that Shane thing doesn't last long! I wanna see some of Steven's reaction to it though. Awesome job, update soon!!! <3
I know this is my first comment but I only just found this story so...that is my excuse. On to the comment...I really like Beth she is a very realistic character with real problems and what not. When I finally read about Harper and all the money her mother has been sending I was very surprised. Even worse than that the fact that she was making Beth pay for more than her share and excused her of being in the wrong. Every time she talks now I really want to reach through this computer screen and knock some sense into her. She is extremely irritating. But it is a really good story...and great update. I don't think that slip on the phone was an accident though. :) Well Happy New Year! Amanda
Smut is fine I think as long as it's not just random shit as in if for no reason to enhance the plot they are fucking or so on. I think it can actually work well for a lot of stories. BTW. I love this. I'm a Bruin's fan so I was obviously watching that game when Stamkos got caught and my heart nearly fell out of my chest. Never like seeing a player get injured. Can't wait for your next update! Addicted to this story :)
oh god, the sad part is i could see Steven doing the cucumber thing. and i'm interested in a sea weber fic so you better post it and not lie about it either