July 9th, 2012 at 02:12am
I have read all eight chapters. I am following a little I suppose but it seems very like massive bits of the plot have been ripped out.
Is this intentional ? Ti make people piece together for themselves or something?
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I believe it's called something like:
You finally found him, but why won't you go get help?!
It's not done, but it's good so far.
I've taken a few chapters out, mainly because it was just too much to write...let alone take in with the images. Was confusing to write, in other words.