I like the storie and I'm very interesting to know what's up with Brian and his "feelings" for Christ.... well I know I have to wait but please hurry up I'm a very, very, very impatient person! soooo... please update soon!
…Brian is thinking about Johnny!! FUCK YES!! ahem but I don't know Lacey is in a coma so its kinda wrong. Hm I wonder what Zack and Matt might do ;) Great update. :D
Amazing story.My heart broke when I found out Mama Val Gee Gee and Lay Lay died.I HATE Michelle so..Idc what happened, though i dont wish bad things on her.Matt and his dimple :D Love this story so much ur a great writer please continue
Awww how adorable! Why is every mean to Johnny?! One day he'll freaking be our ruler and everybody who made fun of him will regret it!! *deep breath* Anyways, I wonder if Zack will take advantage of Matt's drunken state, I'm worried what Brian might end up doing.
Holy shit....did not see that coming at all. I feel bad for all of them. Although the comment before me does make me question if Matt is dreaming this too..Hmm... Anyways whether it is or not, I can't wait to read more
Despite all the horror in this... At least Matt is single...? More like widowed. Gah, You're events are so unexpected. I guess that's a good thing. Please make it somehow better. WAIT. What if this is a dream Matt is having? Oh my goodness. If it is.. Update soon.
Unfortunately, I'm not familiar with the band you're writing about, but it was written well enough that I could follow along. You did a lovely job of capturing the reader's attention, and keeping it. The only advice I can offer is perhaps mix up the sentence structure a little, maybe instead of stating information, you can slip it in as you tell the story. Overall it was a great read, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Yay! Cuddle time with Brian and Johnny love that! :)