Listen to Your Heart. Please, for Me? - Comments

  • vivalasjenna

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    O.O THEY DID THE DANCE WITH NO PANTS IN HIS CAR?! IN A TARGET PARKING LOT?!! oh damn, that's just.... wow xD
    lawlz, well i loved it. it was an excellent chapter and i was dying for you to update and i was pleased with it (: I really can't get over that they did it in the parking lot though xD it just makes me laugh. And i'm glad that they made up, i guess when people say make up sex is good, i guess it really is good! Well, this should get interesting, i wonder what'll happen next!
    November 29th, 2011 at 06:44am
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    Trololololol, i lalalalovvvve it<3
    So, i didn't quite catch what Kenny's gift was, and it sounded like he really liked it (; i'm glad that Macie and Kenny made up, even though they weren't really fighting? Taylor and Garrett need to just start dating, end of story. and ohhh, awkward talk with John coming up next? I need to read that ;D i hope they make up, if not i'm going to cry. they were cute in the beginning x3
    November 24th, 2011 at 01:49am
  • vivalasjenna

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    WHOOO! GO MACIE!! Wow, that was something xD
    I liked it. The blonde bimbo did deserve it. but why was she there again, and why didn't John say anything? Yeah, if i were john i'd be upset about the whole make out thing but i'd also understand that i haven't told her i liked her so i shouldn't be that upset.....but since i'm not john, i can't speak for him...
    Well, you did an amazing job (: Can't wait for the next chapter!
    November 21st, 2011 at 10:10pm
  • vivalasjenna

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    Taylor's advice was really useful. I'm surprised Macie didn't understand it, she sounds like a smart person. The whole 'date'/ hangout thing with Nick was pretty cute. I wonder how it'll be with Kennedy? Gahhhh I love this story! <3
    November 19th, 2011 at 07:12pm
  • vivalasjenna

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    Awe :3 I feel so special! Thank you, and yes i really do love your story. there's something about it that makes me want more. I'm very interested in how this shindig is gunna lay out... (sorry, i wanted to see how that sounded/look, i like it!)

    Anywayyyyy,,, this was a good chap. I don't like that John had left her and fucked some girl. kinda stinks on both sides. Kenny seems like a good guy in here. Most the maine fan fics, they usually have Kenny as an asshole, saddens me, but its not all of them :3 (it's kinda cute to read him as a jerk).

    Keep up with the amazing writing, i can't wait for more<3
    November 19th, 2011 at 06:10am
  • emilyrose

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    This is really good! Keep it up!
    November 18th, 2011 at 11:16am
  • vivalasjenna

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    I'd love to be saved by John. That was really cute and then Taylor just pushing him out of the way like that, wow that was funny XD And oh la la, John kissed her (on the head but it still freaking counts! Right?)
    November 18th, 2011 at 01:37am
  • vivalasjenna

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    You've been doing very well. I really like it and I'm really really interested in what comes next. And I agree with your authors note. I would cuddle with his sleeping body too :3 actually I'd cuddle more with Garrett but if it's just John he'd work too ;D
    November 17th, 2011 at 02:22am
  • vivalasjenna

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    Whoo! First comment!
    Alright, well. i really like this story and it draws my attention, which i love (:
    Taylor and Macie's friendship remind me of my best friend and me. She literally walks into my grandma's house whenever. Saddest part is that she's with my family more than i am XD and when we go to the store and our parents leave us to do what we want. we literally do what we want. its cra-cra. but that's just us :3
    keep up with the good work. i can't wait for more (:
    November 15th, 2011 at 12:28am