Good gracious, dearie. Please update this. It's the only Bo Burnham fiction that I have ever come across that isn't badly written. It'd break my poor old heart if you didn't keep working on this.
I really enjoyed this update, and I'm so relieved that Bo mananged to make a good impression on Nat's family. Phew! I also hope that you feel better soon. :)
I really like Marcus! I hope I get to see more of him! I also really hope that Bo will make a good impression on Nat's family, and that they aren't too harsh with him. Good update. :)
Well, I can already tell I don't like Nat's mother. Although, I understand where she's coming from with Nat not telling anyone that she was going to a different country.
So I thought I'd leave a better comment than just 'love the story, update' and all that stuff. I have to say that I really loved how Nat handled that extremely awkward situation. I can't wait for Bo to meet her family and see how he handles that situation. I can't wait to see what you do next and how the story unveils.
That was a slightly ominous ending, and I'm intrigued. And I would really like to know more about the background with Bo and Elise. But Nat handled that situation extremely well! I would of never of been able to do that; I would of stood awkwardly at Bo's side being all like, "Yep."
if i was ever in that situation...Oh boy. Nat handled that so well i was mildly wondering if that could be possible but then i remembered that im the type of person who is too socially awkward to function sometimes. I guess im pretty much just going to be labeled 'forever alone. like how Nat reacted to Bo's ex being there. i would have been a wonderful human display of awkward.
I don't know why, but Jo really bothered me in this chapter. I disagree with Bo on how puking rainbows is magical. It's not actually that great. Kind of acid-y.