I noticed only one spelling mistake and that was in the last setence. I think you meant to say 'one' instead of 'once'. I love the layout you have for this drabble. I think my favorite thing is the fact that banner is not square or rectangular like they usually are. It is a nice break from the ordinary. I also love how simple yet beautiful you have it set up--solid color, no borders. There is nothing to distract a person from enjoying what you have written, which is a delight to read by the way. How you describe what is going on, it is like you are writing about me and I can feel what you are talking about. That takes the true power of description, which I believe you have captured magnificently. Really loved this drabble and thank you for sharing it. :)
I think you meant to say 'one' instead of 'once'.
I love the layout you have for this drabble. I think my favorite thing is the fact that banner is not square or rectangular like they usually are. It is a nice break from the ordinary. I also love how simple yet beautiful you have it set up--solid color, no borders. There is nothing to distract a person from enjoying what you have written, which is a delight to read by the way. How you describe what is going on, it is like you are writing about me and I can feel what you are talking about. That takes the true power of description, which I believe you have captured magnificently.
Really loved this drabble and thank you for sharing it. :)