Somewhere Out There - Comments

I just read 'Damned.' It was good.

the first chapter was sooo good it gripped me in already! I really loved your art work it fitted the theme sooo well! I'll probably subscribe after you finish the second chapter! So good luck on your future comments because it think it was an amazing read! and if you could let me know what you think of my book Into the Redwoods We Go that would be sweet! :) And let me know what you think! l love reading lgbt stories! I seriously can't get over your theme lol! and add me if you want to talk! :)

The bird story reminds me of 'the raven'

The story about the bird, oh, it was so beautiful.
The plot line and imagery was so artistic,
and I got the most interesting pictures in my head, as if some of the scenes were painted out or something.
Like the bird on her shoulder, insulting everyone she cared for, and the boy in bed next to her with the grim hole in his chest. And it seems like there was this cool, underlying metaphor throughout the piece.
The first paragraph seemed a bit vague and rushed, you could have went into more detail with it, but I loved this nonetheless. <3