Adopted by a pack of wild animals - Comments

  • two sided heart

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    I love it its different update again
    January 13th, 2013 at 03:45am
  • Shattered_Mirror

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    I think it's very clever how you first introduced the concept of werewolves from a five-year-old. The only thing you could work on is your spelling and grammar, and possibly make the main character a little younger; the way she acts makes it seem like she's probably fifteen or sixteen. But other than that, you have great story-telling skills. And I like the term 'word vomit'. I saw it in Mean Girls and fell in love with it! Keep up the good work!
    August 4th, 2012 at 10:41pm
  • KaitylynJo

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    Please update, this story is ah-freckin-mazing.(:
    June 16th, 2012 at 06:33am
  • MarriahShadz

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    This story is so awesome.
    Can't wait for another chapter. :)

    Dog herpes? Hahahaa.
    January 13th, 2012 at 07:18am
  • miss myself

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    At first I as worried that this story would be really cliche but it it AMAZING!!!!! What is the other website that you have this posted on? I want to read the next chapter. :) the characters are really different and make the story interesting.
    Update again soon. Xxxx
    November 12th, 2011 at 02:36am