I think it's very clever how you first introduced the concept of werewolves from a five-year-old. The only thing you could work on is your spelling and grammar, and possibly make the main character a little younger; the way she acts makes it seem like she's probably fifteen or sixteen. But other than that, you have great story-telling skills. And I like the term 'word vomit'. I saw it in Mean Girls and fell in love with it! Keep up the good work!
At first I as worried that this story would be really cliche but it it AMAZING!!!!! What is the other website that you have this posted on? I want to read the next chapter. :) the characters are really different and make the story interesting. Update again soon. Xxxx
November 12th, 2011 at 02:36am
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