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  • layala

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    This is amazing! I am a huge Andrew luck fan and when I found this I couldn't stop smiling. This is a very well written piece. I love the whole plot and Rowan seems to be a good fit for Andrew. Please update soon! I'm dying to know how Andrew and Rowan's relationship unfolds.
    January 11th, 2012 at 07:03am
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    i love this story!!!!!i please continue!!!! :)
    December 12th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • Uprising

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    Can I just say how happy I am to finally see and read a (great!) story that's set not 20 minutes away from me?!?! Ahhhhh this makes me so happy! There aren't too many sharks stories around here... But anyways, this is amazing and I can't wait for more!
    December 2nd, 2011 at 03:24am
  • westcoastwinter

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    That may have been a filler chapter, but I liked it, very cute! I'm glad they got some alone time when the guys went out drinking. And, they watched Tangled! So awesome! I love that movie haha!

    I'm glad she got to meet his sister, too. It was a casual run-in, nothing too serious, but it's cool that she's slowly meeting his family. I think it'd be nice if maybe he got to meet Rowan's sister or brother at some point, see what their reaction to him is. I know Dallas and Quinn aren't exactly happy about their relationship (not really that, but more so that Rowan kept it from them, so they're probably not exactly open to liking him at the moment), so it'd be nice to get someone else on Rowan's side's reaction to him.

    Plus, it'll be nice to see what Andrew's teammates think of Rowan now that they've got to meet her and hang out with her a little bit. See how they interact with her now even on their own when they go on her web show!
    December 2nd, 2011 at 03:09am
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    I've been a bit of a silent reader, but I've gotta say that I really like this even though I'm not too into sports or really affiliated with Stanford! Keep up the awesome writing and update soon :)
    November 29th, 2011 at 11:27pm
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    I've been a bit of a silent reader, but I've gotta say that I really like this even though I'm not too into sports or really affiliated with Stanford! Keep up the awesome writing and update soon :)
    November 29th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • westcoastwinter

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    You are welcome for all the comments! If you take the time to update with such great chapters all the time, the least I can do is comment on them!

    As always, I love the shoutout to Purdue, but I'm sure you're sick of hearing all about that already!

    I'm kinda surprised Quinn kicked Rowan out for the night to be with Dallas. I know how annoying that must be for Rowan, though I think it's cute that Andrew is letting her stay at his place for the night. And I love that all of his teammates kinda interrupted their night, but they obviously really like Rowan, which is a good thing, because it would not have been good for her if his teammates weren't supportive of her and that relationship! And I think their interruption was funny and entertaining, I love that dynamic of all the teammates together!

    This is the first mention of her sister, so I'm curious of what that's going to be all about! The girls day should be interesting to say the least!

    I can't wait for the next part :)
    November 28th, 2011 at 01:38am
  • a pretty flower.

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    You're story is quite adorable. I like Rowan's character because she can have fun and everything but still balance it out with her life. Update soon(:
    November 26th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • westcoastwinter

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    Like I've already talked to you about, I completely understand why Quinn was upsetthat Rowan didn't tell her right away about her and Andrew. Though I loved that Rowan trapped her in the bathroom until she listened to her. And I'm glad they didn't stay fighting for too long!

    I'm excited to see what's up with this new web show that Rowan and Dallas are gonna be doing! It sounds like it could get really interesting and also a way that will force Rowan to combine her love life with her professional life of she ever has to do anything related to Andrew on the show!

    And Dalla and Quinn seem to have an interesting relationship. I haven't quite figured out if Dallas is completely over Rowan yet. I know he used to have a thing for her but I can't tell of he's moving on to Quinn just because he can't get Rowan. If that's the case, I can see some trouble in the future with Quinn being like the backup to Rowan.

    I loved this as usual! I can't wait to read more :)
    November 25th, 2011 at 12:14am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Okay, let me start off by saying I was watching a football game yesterday (not Stanford) and they were talking about Luck, and all I could think of was this story :)

    But, anyways, on to the story itself…another cute chapter :)

    I think their date was cute. I never would have picked him to choose to go to a library for a date, but that’s what makes it so great. It’s simple and they really could just get to know each other, which is really what they needed. The 20 questions thing kinda seemed perfect for them to learn more about each other. It’s nice that they’re learning a little bit more about each other’s pasts, even if they aren’t 100% completely open with each other about everything yet, not that they should be at this stage yet!

    Yeah, their relationship might be moving a little too fast right now, but that’s how some relationships are, and that’s just fine for them!

    It’ll be interesting to see how their relationship progresses with her past and him being such a prominent figure on the football field! :)
    November 20th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • westcoastwinter

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    Okay, where to begin with this chapter? There’s so many things that I loved about it!

    I liked that she didn’t get the interview with him right after the game, it made it a little more challenging for the two of them. And, Dallas, giving the quarterback the phone number! Gotta love the backup QB’s :)

    The football plays were written very well. I obviously didn’t watch that game, but I could envision it just like I was watching it, you did a really good job with it!

    And you threw in Purdue!!! :) I have yelled that cheer countless times, sitting in the front row, enjoying the games. Student sections are crazy, it’s fantastic! But, seriously, I loved that little shoutout to my favorite school!

    The Andrew Ladd reference, I loved! I love him and that part just had me laughing so much, especially when Luck didn’t know who he was.

    I like that they’re joking around with each other. They seem to have the kinds of personalities that will fit well with each other, and I love that you’re really showing that in the story.

    You’re doing such a fantastic job with this story so far! You already know I love it, I’ve told you that countless times, and I look forward to more updates :)
    November 18th, 2011 at 03:47am
  • andrew luck.

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    This is amazing!
    I literally had the biggest smile when I found this.
    Keep it going :)
    November 15th, 2011 at 07:53am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Okay, to begin with, I am in love with this story. I have to admit, I know pretty much nothing about Stanford football (what can I say, I come from a Big Ten school), but the fact that there was a story about college football had me so excited! And, so far, this has not disappointed me at all!

    I loved the way they met, literally running into each other, and the fact that she wasn't all over him immediately and that she even was a little mysterious to him, not telling him her name. I think the deal where she'd tell him her name if they won was cute!

    It'll be interesting to see how she affects him during the game, if he gets preoccupied or anything like that!

    Like I said, I'm already in love with this story, and I can't wait for an update :)
    November 15th, 2011 at 05:11am